Storyline Change

We have decided after doing some test shots that we should change our story,as it was difficult to introduce the villain.
The story has changed in the following was:

• The opening shots up to the pat where the two characters (caretaker, cyclist) meet.
• The cyclist will give the caretaker a letter.
• Then a man will come up and interrupt them (me), in order to get into the church.
• The caretaker and cyclist will look anxious as the man enters the church.
• The cyclist then grabs his bike and pegs it, out of the church yard.
• The caretaker stands for a while, contemplating.
• He then bends down and picks up his hammer, and takes a few breaths.
• He then walks into the church.
• At this point we may have a small montage type sequence of stain glass windows in the church.
• The caretaker will walk up behind the man , who will be praying.
• Then the man raises his hammer and brings it down on the head of the man.
• Before we see the contact, the clip cutts out to a cross and the title 'Great Haseley' comes up. (we will here the sound of the act in the background, which will actually be a melon being smashed up)